Shinrog's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kriz - The BBQ loop!]

Woot!!!

Extend it for sure, sounds like a great combination of your skills and a lil touch of TripleStar (or tripzter) Great job and I expect for it to be even better!

Btw are those 0 bombers stalking on you? it's been a while since your last submission, so I thought they'd leave you alone for a while.

Kr1z responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Paradise on E (Karco Remix)]

Not bad...

I'm pretty impressed, thats a great remix, an ACTUAL remix as a matter of fact.
It was kinda hard to adjust to the bassline you chose, since I've already got used to the original-not-so-original bassline, you know what I mean, but after a double loop, it actually cought my attention, good job on that.

I'm not really a trance expert, but there are parts in which the sweeps are just a lil bit too loud and overcome the other sounds, does it have to be like that? I don't really like it.

Another thing is the leght, the very most trance songs I've heared so far didn't exceed 9 mins, and mostly were very variated during the whole song such as tempo changes, some bass changes and stuff like that, yours gets kinda repetitve.

Now the good stuff, the build-ups were just perfect, so were the FX's.
I also liked the drown-like bass, makes it sound deep and calming.
The mastering-just nothing to criticize for, everything besides the mentioned above was adjusted in a perfect way.

Overall I gave you a 9, not because I don't appreciate your work, but because I'm sure that with the skills of yours you could do something even more WOW than this, so basically the expectations are higher than from other people on this site. Not many poeple deservs that. Peace =)

Karco responds:

Yep, that was the idea of the song. :D

Hmm, I'm not sure what you mean by sweeps. I didn't really have anything "sweeping," I can't really think of anything you'd call a sweep other than some kind of noise FX.

That you consider it repetitive might be a taste thing, considering I and a few others I know often listen to 10+-minute trance songs without having any problem with them. ;) I wanted a full-length trance song, so I made one. If you want something shorter, I've got a song that's 4:10 long coming soon. ;D

I was actually a bit iffy about the buildups, dunno why. Same for the bass because it was on the offbeat, but I guess the arp, rhythm, and synth made up for it. :P I'm pretty proud of my FX, though, and the mixing, which turned out surprisingly well. :O

Honestly, I put a whole bunch of effort into this song, if I change any more, it'd be minor things, like raising or lowering a volume knob by 3-5%, or polishing the EQ a bit. That, and there were some parts completely new to me - the breaks, for example.

Thanks for the review and the advice. :D

[Tracing Again - Mjattie]

Thats nice...

There is some place for improvement of the song itself, you got parts in which 2 different synths colliding at the same pitch, thats definatly good but try to adjust the volumes between them so the volume wont suddenly burst and ruin the flowing...(for example the 0:54-0:57 part)

other than that, a great track.

mjattie responds:

I don't really understand what you're saing O,o... What do you mean with burst? And I thought it flew well... Don't you like the fade-out? And what other parts? hmm, try to explain me a bit more in a pm, please :)

[DJ Ottie - Hard Dance]

not bad...

Overall thats a pretty nice track, though a few things ruining it:
-The lasers are fine, but make them less noisy.
-The part from 0:36-0:49 is lacking something, try adding some light backround.
-The vocals make it sound less dancish, try lowering em/remove em.

that's all =)

DJ-Ottie responds:

thx I deleted the lasers and put voices in it like move to the beat but the lasers are gone listen to the song DJ Ottie - Hard Dance (no lasers) thx forr the hint and listen if this one is betterr ok ?

[~BH~ The Rain Never Stops]

OH MY...

THAT is and EPIC masterpiece. Just a great feeling to it, you just caught the rain feeling and made it into a very pleasant sound. When I hear that piece, I can imagine a ruined kingdom, after a great war they have just won, and just like it came to help them clean all the bad memories, comes the rain, a fresh new start to rule the fantastic lands the kingdom is placed within. A new promiss, for a better life, without further pain, like a redemption and blessing from god himself.
Totally downloaded and thanks for making my day!

ErikMcClure responds:

Thank you very much! ^^

[Viva La Vida Remix]

here..

Take a 5 for a bloody danm good work...nothing else to tell since the remix is great.

maer808 responds:

thanks really thankful that you reviewed this :D

[FF6 Dancing Madness {orch}]

lol...

you could simply put it in 2 or 3 parts in here.

I heared the one with the high quality, and I must say that this is just AWESOME.
Let's not beat the craap out of us with too much words, just know that this is a high-funded movie material.

BowserThedestructive responds:

Thanks :D ya i Enhanced the orignal Song which can be found here..
http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/
nintendo/snes/ff6dancingmad.mid copy then put into browser Or else VG will give ya a no hot linking Error..

listen this midi its not the ORIGNAL song in a sense But it is just the instruments are that of EMulation of MIDI but You still hear the differnce in my orchestration of it thanks for the review :D

[Creating Dreams (Preview I)]

uhm!

Hello2U! Long Time No See, disappeared from the radar for a while? ^.^
i like the change from classical theme to the Trancish theme,very smoothly and not in a blasting it out was a great idea. overall the mastering was great (and yeah,I've downloaded the full version). Sign up on a contract or something, you really do have a future (maybe try to blush harder? xD )

animefireball responds:

LMAO thanx man you're the best!

[Sahara [Nightwish dance remix]]

aye!

thats good... pretty decent track with some nice tunes and variations. I like the main theme,the one with the bells. Bets are nice and the tempo rate is cool. The ending could be a boom,but that's the only miss (at least IMO). great work and keep it up!
btw could you keep me tuned of your next works? cuz I don't really have time to check all the artists I like and if they get a new song out or not is a real mess to check. I'll surley leave a review =)

shin

feeltheoffbeat responds:

Thanks for the review. I agree, the ending could have been more dramatic. I'll absolutely let you know of my future work. I'm just getting started at this and it's addictively fun. I'll be sure to check your stuff out too!

["We Are the Future" -[N]-]

Thats nice..

considering the fact you got to that piece with only the starting samples, I'm really impressed. pretty nice transitions and beats,also the build up is great. gl at that contest thingy =)

Nintechno responds:

Thanks!
I toyed around with the build ups untill I thought they were perfect :3